LGBT: Can you please please please, tell me what you think of my writings? i

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don't like the poetry section? http://www.fictionpress.com/~hateandkilld

click hide bio cause it's long, and review my poems. mainly my newest ones. the one for mikey if nothing else. it's #3 on the list i think. please review and tell me what u think. person who reviews the most will get best answer. i'm just looking for opinions, and please don't be rude about mikey's he was a close friend of mine and i wrote it as i talk to him, simple and to the point kinda thing. i loved him if nothing else, like an idiotic older brother.

*gives all cookies and huggies*
also, when u answer, just say what u reviewed, if u like it, and give me a hug. ^_^
um, jenny, i think u were reading the bio. click the button at the top that says hide bio or scroll down to where there's a list of stuff. each has a titel that u click on to get to the poem.
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lol daoie, i don't mind. i copied most of it from toehrs anway. the last poem on it and the quote namely. lol
 
Bleh, I don't like that section either-
I'll check it out.

EDIT *while grabbing all the cookies*

Aw. Sad. :/
I liked them. :)
I can't really go into detail right now, (mainly from lack of sleep) but the last one is so tragic and... I love it.
D=
 
Sorry I didn't like how it was all set out so gave up after reading a bit. I'm more for titles. Maybe try putting each poem on a different page.
 
i liked them, you have an honest view on the world, something we all need

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sorry i have just got to your other posts and i can relate to what i have read so far
 
I just read a few. They're good. I wish I could write like you, honestly. Except I would probably find someone to make a tune to it so I could sing it. Lyrics wise. Oh, and hopefully you don't mind if I copy some stuff in your bio. Those all seem seemingly true. ;)
 
WOW i really loved Innocence and Silenced Scream they were really good I liked some of the others but those two are my favorite. You are really talented Hak. :) Oops i really loved Where too they all are good but those three are the pooh.
 
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