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eli-zabeth

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One miracle!

By the time I am alone!
I found one and one is enough!
So I am only in pleasure to think nothing has gone!
Nothing is away and nothing looks anymore tough!

I side my seeds !
And ground bares them all!
I find one, I am most in need!
And breaks the toughest wall!

By the time I measure,
everything increases!
And I am left with pleasure!
And tough winds no more can teases!

By the time I see tears!
They are wiped by a friend around!
And one who is near!
Is what I found!

Life is what sees!
Life is what hears!
It has eyes ,it is pleased!
It has eyes of smiles and tears!

Composed by:Sana
 
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