Just wrote a poem, can you give me some opinions?

Sajda

New member
Seriously JUST wrote this.
Thank you :)

Smiles and laughter are fun for awhile
Until it finlly stops
That moment when you think you know
When your life starts to drop
It drops your happiness
Your memories and jokes
It drops your talents
Then you begin to choke
Its at the very moment
When life just kind of stops
Your the only one moving
Yes, my life has dropped.


Its pretty rough right now, as all of my poems are in the beginning, and end...Haha.
Cbdw: I wasn't trying to be funny?
 
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