Judge these song lyrics?

[Peaches&Cream :}]

I haven't named this song yet:
She was only 12 years old
Daddy called her useless fool
Mama never payed attention
And Alisha never felt directed
Always in a world of her own
Home is like a whole new burden on her
She tried so hard to understand
Chorus:
And she said
Daddy and Mommy
Forgive me
I don't know what I'm sayin'
I'm in a haze
For 16 days
Been to the fosters twice
Who would kill that vice?
Lady says you got 5 more days of Hell
And who would know?
Oh,who would know?
Who would know she's dead?

 

[Molly]

good song bit depressing dont know the meaning i would give it a 7 what would the backing beat be??

 

[Sami]

I like it, but it needs a little work, you should make it a little bit longer.