Judge my poetry and songs?

Woosh

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Tell me your opinion!

Walking down a dusty road
I stumbled across a musty toad
He laughed and told me
Of a place
Where sights are sightless
And food has no taste
I told him to stop,
For he was being absurd
But before I could
He was snatched by a bird

Second one:

Close your eyes
And take a step
You know there aren't too many left
They aren't all pleasent
As you'd expect
So close your eyes
And take a step



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