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Casey

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listen to some beutiful songs so decided to write this poem...hope u liked it thanks for reading




Music is an escape from reality
To go where ever we may please.
The bad memories drift behind us
The glorious lights shine from heaven
As a new day begins

The good hearts of all souls
Just searching for a way to break down these walls
For, we all have dreamed of
Something unreachable, impossible, a miracle
But believe it or not
The thin line between love and hate could over lap
So why can’t, dreams become a reality?

Desperate times call for desperate measures
As long as you’re willing to make something out of each day
Spot lights will find you
They may always be searching
But sooner or later
You will be standing center stage.
I guess i can titled it "Believe"
hahah hhahahah love the comments pretty damn funnyhaha LMAO
 
man that poem was deep...

deep like your **** that i will **** right now. man you need bigger tits you have no idea how much it feels like im doing it with a man when i **** you.shit man your poem is good but like jesus you need to work on your *****, like take a class or some shit.

yeah your poem was boss ^^ 10/10
 
i caught u red handed ! ur the one pinching my fathers balls at night! i have been recording on CCTV on my bakyard 4 u !!!! but i found out now that u have been using thermal vision blankets to hide ur self into the house...... im calling the sheriff on u !! and he doesnt want to be busy, ( he's eating pie ;D ) but look because this was ur first offence ill just charge u !!! $2 per pinch, per testicle.

Goodbye Velvet assasin ;D
 
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