JOURNALISM....I was asked to write a news,,, please correct this one....?

yellow

New member
The first ever ______________________ of ________________ commenced on July 3-4, with the theme: “___________________________________”. The overnight training was facilitated by Mr. ____________________., the __________________ and some alumni from ____________________
The event’s keynote speaker is __________________ who highlighted the ____________________________ “_____________”, she said.
There are a lot of activities like _______________,___________,___________.
At the closing ceremony, ___________________ reminded each and everyone to be a ________________.


this is just the backbone.. i will be supplying the data gathered by tom.
i would be really glad if you would comment, make a suggestion or edit this one..


tnx
pls give some tips on how i can make this news longer...
 
Back
Top