Joining the debate on free verse, is this any good as poetry?

viking33

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One cry, and I stumble from bed, cow-heavy and floral
In my Victorian nightgown.
Your mouth opens clean as a cat's. The window square

Whitens and swallows its dull stars. And now you try
Your handful of notes;
The clear vowels rise like balloons.

(It's about a young mother rising in the morning to see to her baby.)
Well spotted, Milieu!
Flattering to think so many of you thought I wrote it.
Sylvia Plath, one of the greatest expononts of free verse, was the authoress.
Milieu has given the whole poem.
 
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