I wrote this poem about a week ago. The song that inspired me to write this is one of the new ones. Song # 134 "See Yourself When All Is New." Please let me know what your thoughts are, if you think I should change anything, and what you do or do not like about it.
Thanks for answering in advance.
***Please star***
New World
Just picture yourself for a moment
In a world brand new
This now dark world
Would be behind you
The trees and the flowers
All colorful and bright
The faces of the people
With no hint of fright
Imagine, a wolf and a lamb
Living in peace
All sickness and death
Will then be made to cease
No tears to cry
And no sight to fear
Because in this world
There is a reason to cheer!
The evil one
Will then have perished
And the only one left
Is the one we’ll cherish
For he kept his promise
And gave us everlasting life
To live in a world of peace
And free of strife!
By: Allison
Please DO NOT answer if you are going to be rude. If you tell me something you don't like about it, at least be nice in the way you say it.
Peace Loving Hippy Chick--- No, you are not going crazy. I did post this question a few days ago and someone decided to report me and it got deleted. Although I don't see how this would be against the guidelines or the TOS.
I remember your answer and thanks for answering again.
Peace Loving Hippy Chick--- If I would have known that they have 'autobots' replying back I would have never tried to appeal this because that is what I did. So I just asked the question again. No big deal.
Thanks for answering in advance.
***Please star***
New World
Just picture yourself for a moment
In a world brand new
This now dark world
Would be behind you
The trees and the flowers
All colorful and bright
The faces of the people
With no hint of fright
Imagine, a wolf and a lamb
Living in peace
All sickness and death
Will then be made to cease
No tears to cry
And no sight to fear
Because in this world
There is a reason to cheer!
The evil one
Will then have perished
And the only one left
Is the one we’ll cherish
For he kept his promise
And gave us everlasting life
To live in a world of peace
And free of strife!
By: Allison
Please DO NOT answer if you are going to be rude. If you tell me something you don't like about it, at least be nice in the way you say it.
Peace Loving Hippy Chick--- No, you are not going crazy. I did post this question a few days ago and someone decided to report me and it got deleted. Although I don't see how this would be against the guidelines or the TOS.
I remember your answer and thanks for answering again.
Peace Loving Hippy Chick--- If I would have known that they have 'autobots' replying back I would have never tried to appeal this because that is what I did. So I just asked the question again. No big deal.