I've written a rap verse....give review?

Slim

New member
Well written rap lyrics for 2nd time...english ain't ma 1st language..but I tried...so give ur review...bad...good...wtever u think

"yeah I'm spitting ma s.hit....I'mma destroy u in one shot...
Like a bullet fired from M-16 slot....wherever I go...
I formulate a new plot...but u can't match the flow."
hey dude!....is that all u got?...cmo'n u can do better....
else I have to shatter ur glass,impress the mass...
the crowd....I think ur lyrics r loud....a little bit..
raise the volume...eat some valium...some pot and weed...
Is the **** need to proceed...to do good deed...
don't find logic in ma spitting....iT's random stuff...
kinda rough ma lyrics....enough for u stubborns....filled with huff..so get lost...get frost...if u didn't liked the ****..
so I'ma end this thing....dissing u....dere is still a long list.
 
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