spiralnautilus
New member
...some help!? Here's what I have so far: My Love For You Is More Than Beauty
My love for you is more than beauty
It is deep and it is the most natural thing in the world:
It is my beautiful ordinary miracle.
You’re not always handsome, but
I love the real you: the one
I uncovered beneath the exterior shell
that the world sees every day
My love for you is more than beauty
I know how lucky I am to have you
Do you have any idea what it’s like
to be in love with someone who’s totally magnificent?
Someone who walks into a room and lights it up like the sun?
My love for you is more than beauty.
I know I need to find a way to connect all the pieces, I need to add some more, I want the title to be a refrain through the whole thing, and I need to make what I have better. I'm just not sure how to go about it.
Any help will be appreciated!
My love for you is more than beauty
It is deep and it is the most natural thing in the world:
It is my beautiful ordinary miracle.
You’re not always handsome, but
I love the real you: the one
I uncovered beneath the exterior shell
that the world sees every day
My love for you is more than beauty
I know how lucky I am to have you
Do you have any idea what it’s like
to be in love with someone who’s totally magnificent?
Someone who walks into a room and lights it up like the sun?
My love for you is more than beauty.
I know I need to find a way to connect all the pieces, I need to add some more, I want the title to be a refrain through the whole thing, and I need to make what I have better. I'm just not sure how to go about it.
Any help will be appreciated!