is this writing bad, minus the grammar errors?

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You’re the one, the one I’m meant to be with.
I feel it every day I’m with you.
Your smooth voice speaks to me, and you tell me you love me.
Your radiant green eyes captivate my attention effortlessly, and suddenly it’s as if I’m floating in mid air.
It’s the way your warm arms put themselves around me, it feels just right.
Your hands, they take mine and I’m on cloud nine
When our soft lips join to kiss, I close my eyes and feel so incredibly loved.
It’s the way my heart beats a little faster when I’m with you, the way I have butterflies in my stomach, the way your smile glows and warms my heart.
You had me at hello and now I want you until goodbye.
It’s you and only you who can make me feel this way.
I know I didn’t respond last night but I needed to write.
P.S My answer to your question is yes, from now until death
 
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