is this worth working with or just should I wad it up and make a rim shot with it?

[??damsy blues ® ?? ™]

flutter moths
and bitter flys
defy the web that hangs
between my window
framed in sunlight, and
undressed limbs
with tiny buds
busting forth as
if tomorrow was not soon
enough for them
...
and I alone
beneath this moon
cocoon not quite
caught tight and held
by weblike tendrils
sticky strings
I wonder
what tomorrow brings
a sudden death
or bursting seams
good night all my lovelys
hugs and more hugs!