IS THIS WELL WRITTEN?

Monserrat

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On October, 2003, I met Mr. Kenneth Ochoa. He is now my partner and we live together. This person loves my daughter even though he is not her biological father. My partner and I have been working together to start a new life full of happiness.

Thank you guys:)

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On October, 2003, I met Mr. Kenneth Ochoa. He is now my partner and I LIVE TOGETHER WITH HIM. This person loves my daughter even though he is not THE biological father. My partner and I have been working together to start a new life full of happiness.
 
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