spunky_smarty
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Slipping falling,
Tumbling, crawling.
Away. Away. Away.
Hurting, pleading.
Seeing seizing.
Heart. Hurt. Heart.
Is this still a poem? A haiku?
I wrote it & im unsure how to classify it.
It's just a start, I wasn't sure if it was worth continuing even though this is pretty basic word usage.
Tumbling, crawling.
Away. Away. Away.
Hurting, pleading.
Seeing seizing.
Heart. Hurt. Heart.
Is this still a poem? A haiku?
I wrote it & im unsure how to classify it.
It's just a start, I wasn't sure if it was worth continuing even though this is pretty basic word usage.