Is this poem suitable for my English Home Work?

[Adi]

I had to write a poem for my English HW abt everyday things or things that U hv experienced

So is this good enough

This morning I didn't want to lift my head,
I didn't even want to get out of bed.

This morning I didn't want to take a shower,
all I could do was listen to the clock tick another hour.

This morning I didn't want to eat,
I didn't even want for my bed to look neat.

This morning I didn't want to go to school,
this just wasn't the day for me to act cool.

I just couldn’t get up my cot
For I was as lazy as a sloth

 

[imported_Amber]

Thats Well Good

OMG

Wow

Clever

 

[Tracey Rocks!]

awww haha thats honestly hilarious, i really like it u keep writin poems, i think ur awesome