crazykittygirl
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I am trying to write a parody of the world's Mary Sues, using my (annoying) canon characters as supporters for the Mary Sue, Aerilyn. Is this poem bad enough?
In my heart, there is a fire now
A fire that no one could put out.
It is the fire of love.
I wish that I was normal enough for him to love me back.
Long ago, I was imprisoned
In a dark and lonely place,
And my blood was smeared on the walls
Of the dungeon.
I still feel alone, but
I think now I can feel alone with someone else.
My heart pounds when he touches me
And I am suddenly someone new.
Please, don’t leave me
Because I need you so much.
The darkness will return for my soul,
And I am a delicate flower that cannot handle such woes.
The monster of my past
Haunts me still, yet
The Angel of morning will someday return
And take me to the bosom of heaven.
For now, the vampires
Still suck at my lifeblood,
And you are the only one who can save me
From the nightmares they wish upon me.
My flesh is delicate.
I am in need of the love that
I have never had.
Stay with me, and save me.
Though I am a warrior,
Sometimes even the best warriors
Need someone to hold.
Be that person to me.
In my heart, there is a fire now
A fire that no one could put out.
It is the fire of love.
I wish that I was normal enough for him to love me back.
Long ago, I was imprisoned
In a dark and lonely place,
And my blood was smeared on the walls
Of the dungeon.
I still feel alone, but
I think now I can feel alone with someone else.
My heart pounds when he touches me
And I am suddenly someone new.
Please, don’t leave me
Because I need you so much.
The darkness will return for my soul,
And I am a delicate flower that cannot handle such woes.
The monster of my past
Haunts me still, yet
The Angel of morning will someday return
And take me to the bosom of heaven.
For now, the vampires
Still suck at my lifeblood,
And you are the only one who can save me
From the nightmares they wish upon me.
My flesh is delicate.
I am in need of the love that
I have never had.
Stay with me, and save me.
Though I am a warrior,
Sometimes even the best warriors
Need someone to hold.
Be that person to me.