is this poem / lyrics good?

I wish i could write something emotional.
jus to provoke.
but not for other nikkas to cut throat.
but remember how im heartless?
dont hate. jus love my darkness.
i define myself as an artist. but artless.
unless i paint a picture .
with lines.
that could be defined.
within my mind .
so beautiful itll make u go bind.
but i cant even see this . bc im blinded.
i was reminded. bc my soul, i cannot find it.
the lies find there way to my tears. my only fear.
is that i never feel love near. my dear? can u steer?
bc i cant control my own life. tossing over night & night.
but my brain burns bright to provide my own light. in this darkened world.
but then she falls again . to break her down .
feels for her chest but it dont make a soound. nuthin but bullshit around her town. i bet she cant even be found. bc shes so down. maybe even below the ground is where she rest her head.
but the dream im persuing .
lets me know this is jus training for the right doing.
not influenced by the fancy cars.i could have a stock car & be way above par.
or actually way below. cuz u know that im cold.
but dont forget Ace Wont Fold.
its only been 14 years but i feel so old.
I call myself different but they call me Bold.
Badass. Daring.
well seeing me must be mind imparing.
that couldnt be farther from the truth.
& i can see u staring.
my eyes red. concious blaring.
i speak to wonder why?
but it only comes out as a sigh..
& why lie?this is my nightmare of a reality.
i dont even have time to explain my spirituality.
jus know i always spit straight factuality.
dont wonder? jus ask about me.
or better yet dont .
simpply ravaged by the world . so all i hear is sterotypes.
the funny thing is .
there never right . jus another dumbass nikka in blind sight.
but i feel like im here to make it right.
i dont bark nor bite but hopefully one day u see my light.
even if it starts with a lighter light.
the kush always burns right.
im not tellin u to smoke but a plant to eaze ur mind never hurt.
but what am i talking for if i can never find words worth?

The System they got us in is fukked up. my opinion not urs but ur entitled to urs in the comments below. hit me up.
 
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