Is this poem/lyric ok so far?

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Is this poem/lyric ok so far?
I'm still working on it and this is what I got so far...is it good?

Sanctuary
By: Adam M. Snow

Come fly with me;
beyond reality;
to my sanctuary home;
within this dream I call, my fantasy;
only you and I can see.
 
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