Is this poem good? its about my music?

S

Staccato Legato

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i already posted this but didnt get many responses so idk yet.

My Music

Chapped lips pressed against cold mouthpiece,
I inhale deeply, and exhale.
Shapes,
patterns,
colors combined,
makes my music.
Fingers pumping,
abs tensing,
mouth clenching,
achieves my goal.
The reason I live.
The reason for my being.
Beautiful Music.

Tell me what u think! :)
 
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