is this poem good? honest opinions!!?

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Sarah

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i should've seen this coming, its happened times before.
now you're the dissapointment,
and my heart has hit the floor.

love? what a stupid thing to say
as your breaking what i've built,
even though its me you constantly betray
your heart holds no guilt.

you used to be that light,
the one that led the way.
But you're slipping out of my sight
once more its me who has to pay

now the strip of light is fading
and you're walking away
i know that you are not waiting,
maybe its better that i die today.
 
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