is this poem good for my girlfriend?? please help?

Dany

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ive been in love with this girl ever since i was a little kid what do you think about my poem???


damn ariel is so sexy
i just wanna taste her pixie
she aint a little mermaid anymore
now shes just a whore
when im done wit her she'll be biggin for more
shells cover her tits
ill suck em to bits
i F**** a mermaid
damn im so paid
deep down in da sea
she lyin in bed here wit me
ill take her breath away
ill blow her flippers away
ill buy her a drank anyday
her new legs will go their seperate ways
gone are those lonely night and days
she'll teach me how to swim ill teach her how to walk
danm how she knows how to walk the talk
her lips are as red as her hair
we here in bed the clothes are there
we'll be in perfect bliss
ima take my milkyway to her hersheys kiss
cant you see we perfect like this
but she'll always be a tease
i'll be on my knees
next thing you know were on a boat
i sure hope that our clothes will float.
BTW ITS ABOUT THE LITTLE MERMAID!!!! not my actual gf i was hoping somebody would notice
 
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