is this poem any good?

Shay shay

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im 16 and i wrote this a few years ago about a friend whose lies drove me to dispise her. we are no longer friends!

Not even when she laughed at me
nor even when she made me cry, but when i look closer,
I see. Girl is full of lies.

And then girl met boy;
girl was desperate for boy's kisses
even if it ment going behind boy's Mrs.

How can i like girl now?
doesn't she see what she's done?
All me and boy can do now is watch her, we see what she's become.

please let no (:
 
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