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"i love you".
The words echo down the hall
as he departs for work with no reply.
She's alone again;
In that house and in life.
Her mind knows it's lost, but her heart can't quit.
So press repeat on this scene
and play it back for fifteen years.
Their blonde little boy grew up fast.
Betrayal fills the home now;
Her mind knew it was only a matter of time.
Her heart takes a blow, and learns to trust her head.
"i'm sorry, i love you".
The words echo down the hall
as she departs for good, with dry eyes.
is this any good? give any suggestions, i'm really open to constructive criticism. thanks!
The words echo down the hall
as he departs for work with no reply.
She's alone again;
In that house and in life.
Her mind knows it's lost, but her heart can't quit.
So press repeat on this scene
and play it back for fifteen years.
Their blonde little boy grew up fast.
Betrayal fills the home now;
Her mind knew it was only a matter of time.
Her heart takes a blow, and learns to trust her head.
"i'm sorry, i love you".
The words echo down the hall
as she departs for good, with dry eyes.
is this any good? give any suggestions, i'm really open to constructive criticism. thanks!