IS this poem a good one?

j.j

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: Theres dinosoars out there
: Its much safer in here
: here in this cave
: you cant go anywhere



: in the cave theres paint
: paint what you know
: a rock or your face
: it isnt much though



: dinosoars are scary shit
: break through their hold
: you win it sets you free
: but not now
: its too cold



: i dont like the way it goes
: you try to leave but the raptor always knows
: and in this zone its so safe
: but its the outside thrills that we crave



I’ll always remember the moments that I left

Admitting there were a times when you felt no stress

And if you don’t escape

The T Rex will attack

And destroy everything you fucking have
 
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