Is this okay for a start to my novel ( it is not opening paragraph )?

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" As I traversed the lonely streets I was greeted by the long cool stares of many of the guards. Most of these pigs were more English than I but have turned ignorance to the British customs and even language, preferring the tounge of the ‘Mother’ Russia as a more respectable way to communicate. Apart from their individual facial features they are mostly indistinguishable from each other. Their dark green uniforms with a large red hammer and sickle on the breast, black boots and grey fluffed ushankas. A glow of despair seems to pretrude from them everyhere they walked and happiness seems to vanish almost instantaneously. "

btw it is a science fiction novel set in a britain which has been invaded by russia after world war two. The country is overrun and main protagoist is an ex-army officer turned guerilla restenct leader.
 
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