The leaves slowly transform in the brisk air
From a lush green to a golden-brown hue
A picturesque sight in the morning glare
The lovely sky so high and crisp and blue
I've spent at least 40 minutes trying to write these lines, but I still haven't totally mastered how to determine meter. If it's not, what suggestions can you give me to make it iambic pentameter? Thank you!
-A very thankful AP English student
From a lush green to a golden-brown hue
A picturesque sight in the morning glare
The lovely sky so high and crisp and blue
I've spent at least 40 minutes trying to write these lines, but I still haven't totally mastered how to determine meter. If it's not, what suggestions can you give me to make it iambic pentameter? Thank you!
-A very thankful AP English student