I know it isn't very good, but I am just saying something random as I experiment.
This is my first time ever writing a haiku, I am not sure if I am any good at it.
Please don't criticize me or anything, I just want to know if it is correct or not, and if not, what can I do to make it correct?
Thanks.
Sorry, the haiku didn't show the first time, I think I copied it wrong.
This is it:
Your eyes stare at me
I feel my heart beat faster
I wish you were mine.
This is my first time ever writing a haiku, I am not sure if I am any good at it.
Please don't criticize me or anything, I just want to know if it is correct or not, and if not, what can I do to make it correct?
Thanks.
Sorry, the haiku didn't show the first time, I think I copied it wrong.
This is it:
Your eyes stare at me
I feel my heart beat faster
I wish you were mine.