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Preface


We all girls piled into daisy’s limo to school. Laughing, giggling, telling secrets, and gossiping. We were known for that. Yes, Daisy, Claire, and Angela, all known for gossip. Like it mattered to us anyways, we ruled James High school, in Manhattan. I Daisy, was known for my tendency of jealousness, Claire known for here tendacy to be compettitive, and Angela, tendacy known for fakeness. Of course Claire and I never said anything about her lypo suction, her 5 plastic surgery, one of them a mess up, and to add on to it, a boob job. She was basically made from China. Untill we met this one girl, that we let all our secrets in, all our gossip, and one forbidden secret, that no one could ever tell. See I can’t even tell you, its so secretive. We believed that she would keep it, for a while, but then we got bad vibes off of her.
She was the best looking, and newest, person at James High School. Whenever she stood people moved, whenever she glanced at someone they’d look away, and even when she walked, they moved, nothing has come across our school since Jessica. We must not talk about it. Anyways, she was the best thing that had ever happened to us, or we were the best thing that ever happened to her. Her name was Maylene
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