is this good poetry? what do you think of it?

experience, ha I should know from that if aggression works
because the sequel plays again reminding me that stressing hurts
so I backpedal away from where all this testing lurks
I know we're all his children but some of us are distressing over struggles worse
sometimes when I sin I feel I’ve crossed the line
but when I don't feel that remorse, are Heavens gates too high to climb?
Have my eyes been shielded from seeing anything divine?
Well sometimes I see and I dine because my eyes feast
But so does the monster inside me
Eats away at my mind, when my faults rewind until he hides me
Only took a day of time combined with sin to know that I don’t like me.
 
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