Hello, this is my first music video for a song that i covered and I'd like to know what you think. I have never acted before and we didn't have a script so everything was just kind of made up as we went 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IyoQULXBCBk
P.S. If theres anything that you don't like about the video would you mind to list it?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IyoQULXBCBk
P.S. If theres anything that you don't like about the video would you mind to list it?