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im supposed to write a dramatic scene for school i don't think it has to be anything Special but ive written one
Jack and Jill
Scene one
Mother: Jack and Jill go up to the hill and get a bucket of water please
Jack Ok mother!
Jack (walks into the next room and gets Jill) Jill mother says to go and get a bucket of water come with me
Jill: ok let’s go
(Jack and Jill set out to get the bucket of water on top of the hill)
Jack wow Jill it sure is hot today
Jill: yes it’s a scorch
Jack I’m glad we are halfway up this hill
Jill yes it’s a long time to get the water
(As they approached the well they noticed there was no rope)
Jill O no this is going to be a problem
Jack yes a very big problem
End scene
tell me if theres anything wrong with it please
really.. no ones gonna anwer my question i just wanted an opinion
im supposed to write a dramatic scene for school i don't think it has to be anything Special but ive written one
Jack and Jill
Scene one
Mother: Jack and Jill go up to the hill and get a bucket of water please
Jack Ok mother!
Jack (walks into the next room and gets Jill) Jill mother says to go and get a bucket of water come with me
Jill: ok let’s go
(Jack and Jill set out to get the bucket of water on top of the hill)
Jack wow Jill it sure is hot today
Jill: yes it’s a scorch
Jack I’m glad we are halfway up this hill
Jill yes it’s a long time to get the water
(As they approached the well they noticed there was no rope)
Jill O no this is going to be a problem
Jack yes a very big problem
End scene
tell me if theres anything wrong with it please
really.. no ones gonna anwer my question i just wanted an opinion