i have a gig at a comedy club tommorow and i have alot of jokes and i just came up with one tell me what you guys think
"ok so a few years ago my marrige was going through a tough time, and i saw a commercial on the radio for maritual problems, so i called them and i said i wanted the help and they said theyd send something in the mail, so a few weeks later i recieved there letter, and, it came with a pack of extenze, and a note that said "talk it over
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then everyone laughs, " we divorced a few months later when she saw it..."
ok is that good? what should be added what should go
thanks
"ok so a few years ago my marrige was going through a tough time, and i saw a commercial on the radio for maritual problems, so i called them and i said i wanted the help and they said theyd send something in the mail, so a few weeks later i recieved there letter, and, it came with a pack of extenze, and a note that said "talk it over
"then everyone laughs, " we divorced a few months later when she saw it..."
ok is that good? what should be added what should go
thanks