Lauren Landis
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Original Blurb:
When Isabella Swan moves to the gloomy town of forks and meets the mysterious, alluring Edward Cullen, her life takes a thrilling and terrifying turn. With his Porcelain skin, golden eyes, mesmerizing voice, and supernatural gifts, Edward is both Irresistable and impenetrable. Up until now, he has managed to keep his true identity hidden, but Bella is determined to uncover his dark secret.
What Bella doesn't realize is that the closer she gets to his, the more she is putting herself and those around her at risk. And it might be to late to turn back...
Deeply seductive and irresistibly compelling. Twilight is an extraordinary love story that will stay with you long after you have turned the final page
This is my Blurb:
Isabella Swan doesn't expect much of a change when she moves to Forks,Washington. However, things take a turn when she meets the beautiful and mischievous Edward Cullen. Bella quickly realizes that there is much more to Edward than what meets the eye. As Edward tries to hide his secret, Bella struggles to uncover it. Little does Bella know that the more she hangs around Edward, the more she puts her and her loved ones in danger. As she tries to protect herself and everyone around her, she learns that it is much harder to keep everyone safe.
tell me anything that should be changed.thanks.
When Isabella Swan moves to the gloomy town of forks and meets the mysterious, alluring Edward Cullen, her life takes a thrilling and terrifying turn. With his Porcelain skin, golden eyes, mesmerizing voice, and supernatural gifts, Edward is both Irresistable and impenetrable. Up until now, he has managed to keep his true identity hidden, but Bella is determined to uncover his dark secret.
What Bella doesn't realize is that the closer she gets to his, the more she is putting herself and those around her at risk. And it might be to late to turn back...
Deeply seductive and irresistibly compelling. Twilight is an extraordinary love story that will stay with you long after you have turned the final page
This is my Blurb:
Isabella Swan doesn't expect much of a change when she moves to Forks,Washington. However, things take a turn when she meets the beautiful and mischievous Edward Cullen. Bella quickly realizes that there is much more to Edward than what meets the eye. As Edward tries to hide his secret, Bella struggles to uncover it. Little does Bella know that the more she hangs around Edward, the more she puts her and her loved ones in danger. As she tries to protect herself and everyone around her, she learns that it is much harder to keep everyone safe.
tell me anything that should be changed.thanks.