Is this an "ok" haiku? Its for a girl i love, she asked for something that had

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Alex

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meaning and this is what i got.? I once was so cold
Couldnt care about a thing
Then along came you

You made me feel bold
Taught me love means everything
A new point of view

Now all can behold
I can take on anything
Because i have you
 
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