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“Meeting at order!” Beren’s voice reverberated throughout the room. The sudden noise made my ever-changing skin go from Earthly tan to Elvin purple. Beren hit the gavel against the desk three times to earn our complete awareness. “Andricka,” Beren called.
A petite little girl stood up. Her hair was a sky blue color, and closer inspection showed me that her eyes were as well. Though, she had specks of white in them—symbolizing clouds. He attire was a lime green shirt, with dark blue shorts—they had a smiley face on them. As the turned to look at Beren, I caught a glimpse of metal. Such a small girl had a lip ring! Not to mention that she had a mischievous smile on her lips the whole time. Yes, the name ‘Andricka’ fits her.
“Yes?” She answered. A collective gasp flowed around the room. She didn’t say Sir! To our surprise, cruel Beren smiled and pulled her into a hug. He whispered something incoherent to my keen ears. Andricka’s smile became more genuine and she clapped her hands together once.
“Say hello to your new Sergeant,” she said while waving.


DON'T CRITICIZE MY GRAMMAR! xD please and thank you.
~<3x
 
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