Is this a well written poem?

Megan

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Here's a poem I wrote today...

I cried today...
This isn't new..
It's been happening for quite a while,
but mostly,
when its your number that I dial.

I call your phone-
But mostly,
When i'm sad and feel alone..
These days,
that's 24/7...
and the last time I heard your voice,
It felt like heaven.

I lay awake,
thinking of you...
they say you've given up,
Is that true?
and if it is,
dont let me stand in your way.
Even a simple goodbye,
I'd love to hear you say.

I can only hope,
and pray,
That we'll meet again someday.
Mom says things will be back to normal,
eventually.
But until then..
Let's just wait and see.


This is about my best friend whom i can no longer see. I just want to know if its good.
 
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