Is this a vivid enough character description?

Rebecca Matley

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It's a she and I'm describing her basic physical appearance. Tell me if it's decent and legitamate description.
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Though I had both Caucasian and Hispanic mixed in me, I had always looked much more Latino than I did white. Tanned skin with ink colored hair and chocolate eyes; I even had the Latino curves, as my mother used to say. It was my face shape that gave away my mixed lineage. My jaw was a slight square, but had an elegant curve to it that made my face both strong and gentle. My cheek bones were high, almost pompous, and my nose was pixie light, turned slightly upward with the natural arrogance that my cheek bones had.
 
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