Is this a poem or would it be better as lyrics?

M

Mister Solitude

New member
The ribbon coils as she makes her move
clickety-clack, clickety-clack
I feel the letters one by one
clickety-clack, clickety-clack
The keystrokes are like a siren's song
clickety-clack, clickety-clack
She seduces me with her keys of type
clickety-clack, clickety-clack
The air, it breathes a long deep sigh
clickety-clack, clickety-clack
She falls silent now, my letter complete.
Also, what title could you suggest?
Maybe "Typewriter Seduction"?
 
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