Is this a halfway decent free verse?

funnytheway

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Without that word, without that stare
I wouldn’t have cared to venture
Where you came from, where you went
I followed every step.
The elixir of life, water into wine
A shot of courage and a good luck charm
I touched your hand, a shot in the dark
But the lantern remains across the lake.

Close enough to touch, but far enough to miss
I can’t breathe until I’m sure
Alluring, uncertainty certainly is
A feeling in your core

An empty caste yields only disappointment
And regret is only as regret does
But compelling, when what should be
Regretted brings but glee.
 
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