ApocalypticZombie
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this is the first paragraph of a story that i am working on...what does it tell you about the character? is it a good to introduce the character? moreover is it a good way to start my story? i'd just like some other opinions other than my own...also i'm making sure that i'm getting across the character traits that i want to get across...thanks!
Annie Gardner turned in her test and trudged out of the classroom. She was sure that she had failed that test; she was possibly the worst test taker ever. At least it was Friday and she was done with classes for the week, but why in the hell would a teacher force them to take a test on a Friday? It was beyond Annie’s willingness to comprehend. She reached her car and threw her backpack into the backseat before climbing behind the wheel. At first she just sat and let the awfulness of the test wash over her, if she didn’t let it sink in she would be unable to let it go for the rest of the night. And something like that could ruin a person’s entire weekend. Ruined weekends were unacceptable in the life of Annie Gardner. She threw her car into drive and headed towards the boys’ house.
Annie Gardner turned in her test and trudged out of the classroom. She was sure that she had failed that test; she was possibly the worst test taker ever. At least it was Friday and she was done with classes for the week, but why in the hell would a teacher force them to take a test on a Friday? It was beyond Annie’s willingness to comprehend. She reached her car and threw her backpack into the backseat before climbing behind the wheel. At first she just sat and let the awfulness of the test wash over her, if she didn’t let it sink in she would be unable to let it go for the rest of the night. And something like that could ruin a person’s entire weekend. Ruined weekends were unacceptable in the life of Annie Gardner. She threw her car into drive and headed towards the boys’ house.