is this a good villanelle?? please be honest.....?

ok, so i need to write a villanelle for english class, and please give me honest answers. if you like it please tell me what you liked, or if you didn't, then please tell me what you didn't and how i can improve that. please only people who know what they are talking about.. it is really important it is called, till the very last second and here it is:


I'm not a fighter, but I AM strong
All day, all night, all the time from dusk till dawn
One day they'll have sense of right and wrong

Not big enough to cause a fuss, no need to put it in a song.
All I can do is sit back and........... Yawn...
I'm not a fighter, but I AM strong

They all have jokes, all day long
But I know they are fake, nothings real, they're all good enough as drawn
One day they'll have sense of right and wrong

I mean, sure, it's annoying, but it's a curse that's life long
To them the "life long fight" is on
Well, I'm not a fighter, but I AM strong

Nothing, is what I did, all I did was come along
The game is on; to them were simply a game pawn
One day they'll have sense of right and wrong

When the clock of my heart ticks its final seconds ill laugh and say "so long"
They'll understand when I'm gone
That I was never a fighter, but I AM strong
Then, yes then, they'll have sense of what's right and what's wrong.
 
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