Is this a good thesis statement for a History essay on recruitment during WWI?

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I am not looking for whether or not you agree, I am looking at choosing a solid thesis. How does this sound?

The Canadian government deceived young Canadians into enlisting in the war.

My points to prove this will be through:
Propaganda, the promises the government made, and the naivety of young soldiers.
 
A thesis statement should be a statement and not a question so you are on the right track. Another thought could follow: "Propaganda and the Canadian governments role in recruiting soldiers for WWI."
 
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