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this is some of my 1st chapter.
The stories called Treasure's can lead to Disasters.
1st chapter : On a very dark and silent night, my brother Shawn had gotta a huge fish from the creek and put it right down my shirt! He 14 and he gets on my nerves.
My name is Anne Mavves. Im 18 years old. My brother has a puppy and a goldfish. His goldfish's name is Swimmy and his puppies name is Parrie.
Our father is living with my Aunt Claire at the moment. But our mother is in welfare right now. As you can see, our family is very poor.We live in a small, but nice shack by the shore. Everyday me and my brother would fish and swim to get us some descendt food. Our mom's name is Sharlet Mavves. She can get very mean though.
this is some of chapter 1 . tell me some advise or if you like it so far.
The stories called Treasure's can lead to Disasters.
1st chapter : On a very dark and silent night, my brother Shawn had gotta a huge fish from the creek and put it right down my shirt! He 14 and he gets on my nerves.
My name is Anne Mavves. Im 18 years old. My brother has a puppy and a goldfish. His goldfish's name is Swimmy and his puppies name is Parrie.
Our father is living with my Aunt Claire at the moment. But our mother is in welfare right now. As you can see, our family is very poor.We live in a small, but nice shack by the shore. Everyday me and my brother would fish and swim to get us some descendt food. Our mom's name is Sharlet Mavves. She can get very mean though.
this is some of chapter 1 . tell me some advise or if you like it so far.