Is this a good start to my project (Comic Life)?

Luis Niebla

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I'm researching Fullmetal Alchemist for one of my classes and we have to make a manga kind of set up in order to do the essay which is five paragraphs, and add in pictures, I just want to ask if this is good. I went a little crazy with the editing, and I kind of suck at contrast or matching colors or anything really having to do with creativity.

http://oi53.tinypic.com/2e5v9zt.jpg

No need to criticize the content, just what the layout is like and if it is good. In the green box I'm going to write about why I chose this topic, I just haven't gotten to it yet, so it's not going to be left blank.

I still have another page to do about the same topic but I figure if you guys rate this good I think the other page will be good.

Thank you!
 
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