Is this a good start to a review of Tower Bridge? Any improvements? Mistakes?

skatergirl2K10

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Hello! I have to write a review of Tower Bridge for my job and i would like to hear what you think of my introduction and maybe even how i could i improve and grammatical mistakes! thanks! :) And also, help! i dont know what else to write about so please help with that aswell! :)

Tower Bridge is established on the River Thames in Central London, UK.It is magnificent and guaranteed to captures the hearts of those who admire it. Tower Bridge offers stunning views of London that you will never forget. Admire the fascinating architecture, the sublime colours-red, white and blue.
 
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