Is this a good song? Please be honest!!?

This is what I have so far but I don't think it's very good :/


Your selfless acts and deeds of good have won me over. Completely consumed in your love.*
I turn and give myself up...
Without hesitation.
For you oh Lord.
For your majestic plan
knowing I am meant for your glory
Take me now
As I've surrendered.
Giving up my life for you
Not quite sure what to do now

I just want some HONEST opinions. Thanks!
 
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