Is this a good song i made up its for a health project?

[Allison Brooke]

Price Tag starting at 1:00
Ending at 2:00
Skipping 1:40-1:54
Duration 45 seconds

This is about the bones, bones, bones
It’s about the bones, bones, bones
Just wanna make the world dance
Use all 206 bones
It’s about the ha ba bones ba bones
Its about the ya ba bones ba bones
Just wanna make the world dance
Use all 206 bones
We need to take it back and remember what make them bones unite
Were talking about those joints
And when we smile we use 171 bones
That makes us sooo happy
And that’s the bones bones bones
That’s the bones bones bones

Its the tune of Jessie J Price Tag