Is this a good poem to you?

warhawk1017

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I know it might be kind of lame I have not written poetry in a while. Comment /Feedback would be appreciated
Is love the right word?
I feel like I can’t spread my wings like a bird
I adored her since the moment I met her
Every moment spent with her I found her cuter and cuter
She is what made my day
Until her family got in the way
I asked her to be mine
She likes me too she says but you must recline
Her father does not allow her to love
I think to myself but don’t we live to love?
 
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