Is This A Good Poem To Send To A Guy?

  • Thread starter Thread starter Jamie C
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I wrote it and I was just wondering what you guys thought? This is it:

'I know it seems like a nightmare,
But I need you like I need air.
Its hard to hide my emotions,
I need you like fish need oceans.

My feelings for you are so real,
Its so hard to say how I feel.
I need you more then day or night,
When I talk to you its so right.

I know my feelings might scare you,
I just felt its time you really know.
I know you won't feel the same way,
But I just wanted to say you make my day...

Thank you.'

What do you think?
 
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